Changes to Final Draft

To improve my final cut I shortened the establishing shots as I believe they dragged out too long. Also I tweaked the audio and added a few new sound effects to really achieve the look and feel I was hoping for. It was really difficult editing my final cut and it has been an experience I hope I will embark upon again in the near future. I have included pictures of my timeline in Sony Vegas so you can get an idea of all the layers of video and sound etc.